It was 4:30 a.m when my mom woke me up. I was happy to go but at the same time tired to get up. I changed to my clothes. I had on jeans, a long sleeved shirt, boots, a sweater, and a winter jacket. So I could be more awake my mom made me coffee and added some milk. That was when she woke up my cousin and my father. They got dressed and my cousin had the same as me, coffee with some milk and my dad had normal black coffee. My mom gave us some snacks so we could take to El Nevado (volcano) so we ould pack it and put it in the car. We got in the car and the trip was just about to start.
One hour and a half later...
My dad, my cousin, and I got out of the car to see the nevado. It was beautiful, with snow, and letting out smoke. When a cloud passed and parked right at the Nevado we decided to go see the old hotel with the thermal waters, they were remodeling. We decided to go back to my house and that was the end of the trip.
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One hour and a half later...
My dad, my cousin, and I got out of the car to see the nevado. It was beautiful, with snow, and letting out smoke. When a cloud passed and parked right at the Nevado we decided to go see the old hotel with the thermal waters, they were remodeling. We decided to go back to my house and that was the end of the trip.
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